Thursday, December 11, 2008

Failure..

Words have kept twittering inside,
clinging onto crutches, of my feeble kind
until another day, they stumbled upon
the baffling maze engraved upon my mind.

They couldn't trace their way out;
perplexed and captivated, as curses unwind
Crying for another life, another dream, another light..
They were left to rot in the shambles of a mind.

Words kept betraying at bedside,
when incessant tears dampened my pillow
as I rummaged through some darkened alleys
Groping for words, that abandoned me hollow..

Last night I treaded the lanes and bylanes of hope
Revisiting every dream you taught me to see
And goes with me the hollow you left
On a holiday with failure by the side of the sea...

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Its never a failure... its always a step to SUCCESS...

little boxes said...

oh this is beautifully written...i loved the imagery

VB said...

Hey I read your blog only after you commented on one of my posts.And I am glad I did...Lovely post.The words seem so true and pure,so filled with emotion.
To revisit the feeling of hope in any failing situation is rather painful yet calming....the "somedays-s" make our next day worthwhile.
Hang in there.
I am sorry but I do not know you.
Yet my best wishes go out to you.And Merry Christmas...!

Lucid Darkness said...

The despair is truly touching... And yes, words cause so much pain when they are trapped inside and fail to blossom into sound. I hope you are better now.

Happy new year.